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by Nitramy
Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:15 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Mobile Suit Gundam SEED ETERNITY
Replies: 246
Views: 40345

Re: Mobile Suit Gundam SEED ETERNITY

But that said, on the whole, I enjoyed the crap outta this fanfic, all of them, everything you've written. And no matter who may criticize about "grimdark" that and "Victory rip-off" this, no one can or should deny your writing ability and talent. I eagerly await whatever you write next. And that's...
by Nitramy
Fri Sep 16, 2011 7:13 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Mobile Suit Gundam SEED ETERNITY
Replies: 246
Views: 40345

Re: Mobile Suit Gundam SEED ETERNITY

Maybe now the haters are gonna stop hatin', what with the After War ending you managed to pull off.

*does the slowest of slow claps for this 150-and-more-chapters epic* Bravo.
by Nitramy
Thu Jul 14, 2011 4:55 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: General Fanfiction Discussion 2: Electric Boogaloo
Replies: 340
Views: 94820

Re: General Fanfiction Discussion 2: Electric Boogaloo

I don't know, come up with a solution to the Coordinators' breeding problem?

Enough genetic modification and the barrier between Coordinators and Naturals would be gone, and the moderates would have essentially "killed off" all the Coordinators in a few decades or so.
by Nitramy
Wed Jul 13, 2011 11:25 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: General Fanfiction Discussion 2: Electric Boogaloo
Replies: 340
Views: 94820

Re: General Fanfiction Discussion 2: Electric Boogaloo

Had this idea for a post-DESTINY CE series in my head... even had a few chapters and a synopsis all planned out. Basically, we have a moderate faction of the Blue Cosmos (if you want the analogy, the BC extremists = Master Asia; the BC moderates = Domon Kasshu) slowly gaining support in the Earth Sp...
by Nitramy
Wed Jul 13, 2011 4:18 pm
Forum: Anime and Manga
Topic: A Victory Gundam music question
Replies: 3
Views: 1057

Re: A Victory Gundam music question

Could it be a medley of several different songs or an arrange of an existing one?
by Nitramy
Mon Jul 11, 2011 8:11 pm
Forum: Anime and Manga
Topic: A Victory Gundam music question
Replies: 3
Views: 1057

A Victory Gundam music question

So I was playing SD Gundam G-Generation F, and I wondered what the "Enemy Phase" music was during the Victory Gundam stages. It sounds really serene, sweeping, and totally not the type of music you want to hear when the Zanscares are throwing themselves at your heavily customized original characters...
by Nitramy
Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:10 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: General Fanfiction Discussion 2: Electric Boogaloo
Replies: 340
Views: 94820

Re: General Fanfiction Discussion 2: Electric Boogaloo

*facedesks repeatedly* I just waded through the crap that is an unpleasable reviewer. So I post links to my story and ask the question (and this is basically the point), "how do I make this story better"? And then some schmuck has to walk in and say (and I quote) "This was a badly written story. So ...
by Nitramy
Sun Feb 13, 2011 12:59 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: General Fanfiction Discussion 2: Electric Boogaloo
Replies: 340
Views: 94820

Re: General Fanfiction Discussion 2: Electric Boogaloo

General story-related question: how do you give a very good hook to your story without actually spoiling most of the important details in the plot?
by Nitramy
Sat Feb 05, 2011 10:26 pm
Forum: Anime and Manga
Topic: The Official SRW OG: The Inspector Thread Mk II
Replies: 497
Views: 48362

Re: The Official SRW OG: The Inspector Thread Mk II

Well, yeah. But then again, we could also make the argument for her being the female counterpart of Bian Zoldark. I mean, look at Valsione and Lamia.
by Nitramy
Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:27 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: General Fanfiction Discussion 2: Electric Boogaloo
Replies: 340
Views: 94820

Re: General Fanfiction Discussion 2: Electric Boogaloo

Doesn't it trouble you that the biggest critics are often the ones with little to no positive contribution to your stories as possible?

And when you do ask for help about some element in your story, they are conspicuously... absent.
by Nitramy
Thu Dec 30, 2010 4:36 pm
Forum: Anime and Manga
Topic: CE Gundam and the American Gundam Fanbase.
Replies: 48
Views: 9962

Re: CE Gundam and the American Gundam Fanbase.

Turn-A pulled off both local focus and world-changing story well enough, didn't it? (It also had the Turn-A as a glorified grunt for a good chunk of the story, too.) Going back to the makers, this just means a series that has multiple demographic appeal can be done, if your director and writing staf...
by Nitramy
Thu Dec 30, 2010 10:31 am
Forum: Anime and Manga
Topic: CE Gundam and the American Gundam Fanbase.
Replies: 48
Views: 9962

Re: CE Gundam and the American Gundam Fanbase.

Sort of like Turn-A Gundam, if you think about it - fans are either turned off by the 'stache or bear with it and find out it's more than just pew pew lazors and giant robots slugging it out. Okay, this might come out of left field, but why do Occidental Gundam fans prefer the more "grunt-focused" s...
by Nitramy
Sat Dec 11, 2010 8:44 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: General Fanfiction Discussion 2: Electric Boogaloo
Replies: 340
Views: 94820

Re: General Fanfiction Discussion 2: Electric Boogaloo

How do you do power-balancing when making a crossover story without massively gimping one side?

I've been trying to balance one side versus the other out, and it's getting to be rather frustrating.
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yes, this is still the Naruto x Nanoha fic I'm talking about
by Nitramy
Wed Dec 08, 2010 11:03 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Mobile Suit Gundam SEED ETERNITY
Replies: 246
Views: 40345

Re: Mobile Suit Gundam SEED ETERNITY

Soma Taozi wrote:What the frak is /m/?
4chan's /m/echa board.
by Nitramy
Sun Nov 21, 2010 5:48 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Mobile Suit Gundam SEED ETERNITY
Replies: 246
Views: 40345

Re: Mobile Suit Gundam SEED ETERNITY

The only reason for depicting Kira to be an unstoppable juggernaut in a Mobile Suit is to build him up all the way to the near end...
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...where he'll finally get what's coming to him.
by Nitramy
Fri Oct 08, 2010 2:23 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: General Fan Fiction Discussion
Replies: 533
Views: 62285

Re: General Fan Fiction Discussion

You should also be careful not to step into the more rabid forms of feminist thinking and ideology when writing your fic...
by Nitramy
Tue Oct 05, 2010 1:36 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: General Fan Fiction Discussion
Replies: 533
Views: 62285

Re: General Fan Fiction Discussion

Thanks. Well... I've got this work done (part 1 is finished, thank goodness) that involves the crossing over of two (and maybe more) series. One is your generic shonen action series, while the other is your generic magical girl ser- wait, her costume's color scheme is like a Gundam, and was that a g...
by Nitramy
Tue Oct 05, 2010 11:46 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: General Fan Fiction Discussion
Replies: 533
Views: 62285

Re: General Fan Fiction Discussion

Would it be alright to make a topic where people can ask for help about (un)finished work and how to write better?

It can be a topic to recruit beta-readers for their work, as well.
by Nitramy
Fri Sep 17, 2010 2:34 pm
Forum: Anime and Manga
Topic: Just Finished V Gundam... Awesome SPOILERS AHEAD
Replies: 40
Views: 5099

Re: Just Finished V Gundam... Awesome SPOILERS AHEAD

I don't know. The Zanscare suits looked exotic and more Imperial Stormtrooper-like to me, and the ships with wheels were rather... I don't know, inspired. And Victory did something that SEED Destiny didn't: Usso and Shakti's blind idealism was gone by series' end. Can't say that with a straight face...
by Nitramy
Fri Sep 17, 2010 2:31 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Mobile Suit Gundam SEED TWILIGHT
Replies: 276
Views: 50337

Re: Mobile Suit Gundam SEED TWILIGHT

Not saying that your DESTINY rewrite is good OR bad, but I think it serves as a piece to a more coherent whole (hence the sidestories, TWILIGHT and the upcoming ETERNITY). Never mind the hostility and anger overshadowing artistic judgment - most of it directed towards the canon developments after ep...