Mobile Suit Gundam: Jupiter's Flower

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Mobile Suit Gundam: Jupiter's Flower

Post by CHASER » Fri Sep 21, 2007 6:06 am

Yes, as the SEED FanFic was abandoned for various reasons, this was the new one that rose to take its place.

MSG: Jupiter's Flower takes place in an original universe, during the AD calendar. I've put my little spin on the Gundam following my past experience writing in a more 19th century Gothic fashion. The episodes are hosted on the site linked below, which also keeps all other information relevant (profiles, technology, Etc.).

Currently Episode 1: 'To another World' is up, giving the beginnings of several things. Just a general, short forewarning; there is fairly frugal use of any kind of censorship. When there's blood, there is blood. Where there's violence, there will be violence. Although it will all be 'proper' of the situation or the kind of visualisation it tries to put across. I didn't mention love or sex, because as much of a part that it may play, you can be certain I won't be writing anything bordering on pornographic.

Anyway, read and hopefully enjoy. Leave comments and questions either here or there, and I'll do my best to address them. The link follows;

Mobile Suit Gundam: Jupiter's Flower

And as a little bit, I'll put out here a small quote from the episode to see if that sparks some interest in reading it.

“The pilot is dead. Someone… we need some buckets over here…”
HellCat wrote:
ShadowCell wrote:I'm skipping this one if it's in suppository form, though. Like, I like Gundam, but not that friggin' much.
They decided against that because most Gundam fans already have something up their butt.

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Post by CHASER » Wed Oct 03, 2007 7:47 am

Oh my, talking to myself in a Fic topic again! But it's ok this time, since I get plenty of talk out of the topic.

Episode 2: "Disturb the Giant's Slumber" is now officially up, along with a few more things that will pop up in the following moments after this post.

A few comments from myself at the episode, just for a start. It gets kind of crazy at some point (but then again so did the first), and you'll probably be rolling your eyes at me for some points, too. It probably requires some degree of suspension of disbelief, to which degree depends on how open you are. As usual questions are welcome and answers are probably needed.

And a little, one-line quote again. Although less shocking XD
“Anyone else here wondering why we didn’t just stay on Earth?”
HellCat wrote:
ShadowCell wrote:I'm skipping this one if it's in suppository form, though. Like, I like Gundam, but not that friggin' much.
They decided against that because most Gundam fans already have something up their butt.

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Post by Antares » Wed Oct 03, 2007 8:51 am

Well I can make this a dialogue if that helps? :P
-We will not be caught by surprise!
*Almost everyone I've killed uttered similar last words.
-Then I am glad once again that you are on my side.
*They've often said that too.

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Post by Ragormha » Wed Oct 03, 2007 8:53 am

Well, umm I haven't read it yet, but I will and I'll comment back.
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Post by CHASER » Thu Oct 04, 2007 3:41 am

Dialogue would be nice~

Anyway, this came a few more hours late that I wanted it too, but I've made a fairly extensive update to a few things. The technology glossary is now alphabetised, and holds the added information for: the Bio-Polymer Shell, the Type-1 Cockpit, the Cockpit-Jelly*, the Membrane Suit*, A Mobile Weapon/Suit (all odd three paragraphs of what one is - trust me, you'll need it), and the Under-Skin**.

There's also some information about a few of the important locations about. I think the Earth one was a little flimsy, though the more important one should be good.






* = yes, I'm serious.
** = a pretty basic component, despite the odd name.
HellCat wrote:
ShadowCell wrote:I'm skipping this one if it's in suppository form, though. Like, I like Gundam, but not that friggin' much.
They decided against that because most Gundam fans already have something up their butt.

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Post by <chronicler> » Mon Oct 13, 2008 2:50 am

All your links are dead, by the way.

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Post by <chronicler> » Mon Oct 13, 2008 6:34 pm

<chronicler> wrote:All your links are dead, by the way.
Sorry, just realized that the last post wasn't two weeks ago, but a year and two months ago...

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Re: Mobile Suit Gundam: Jupiter's Flower

Post by DAG101 » Mon Oct 13, 2008 9:16 pm

CHASER wrote:
“The pilot is dead. Someone… we need some buckets over here…”
haven't been able to read it yet--the links are dead, as you've already been told--but that quote sounds like something from a comedy.

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