ALL CHAPTERS FOR YOUR CONVENIENCE
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
With all my painstaking research done, I present Gundam 0080: Long Journey Home! It's about a group of ex-Zeons deciding to throw in the towel and just head back to Side 3, where they can be done with war once and for all. Of course, they're in for one heck of a trip...
Long Journey Home (UC, 0080)
Long Journey Home (UC, 0080)
Last edited by Inferno on Sat Jan 22, 2011 4:57 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Re: Long Journey Home (UC, 0080)
Bump for Chapter 2. Expect to see our protagonists in action in part 3!
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PART 3! WITH MY FIRST NON-RP FIGHT SCENE EVER.
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Part 4: The Federation Strikes Back!
Re: Long Journey Home (UC, 0080)
OK, temporary hiatus, since I now have something occupying most of my saturdays. But I will try to get something in over the next 4 weeks.
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I read Chapter one, and while you did a really good job with the setting and explaining what characters/mobile suits we will see. I think it could of been done better if you explained these things through a plot rather than just a narrative, and maybe leave some of the back stories to be explained as the story progresses, allot of good potential though. will continue on in a bit.
Sacrosanct (man as microcosm)
Four temperaments (fuse) - statuesque entity
The fortitude of a pristine creature
Transcend tyranny- Quintessential Power
Four temperaments (fuse) - statuesque entity
The fortitude of a pristine creature
Transcend tyranny- Quintessential Power