Mobile Suit Gundam SEED TWILIGHT

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gaaaaaaaawd Phase 38 is up.

Good news is I'm still right on track to meet my "when it's done" deadline.
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Another fine installment, and here's to hoping that this doesn't go the way of the last 'done when its done' project, Duke Nukem Forever. Keep the momentum going and get that next phase out by the end of next week!

Also, props for including good old Mighty Mo in the Resistance. Sometimes all you need is a shell the mass of a Volkswagen to get your point across.
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Heheh, right off the boat, Shinn gets jumped. Figures.
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A very good installment, Shadowcell. I'm really liking the focus you're putting on character development over action. Here's hoping the rest of the series follows up shortly; that wait was killer.
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gnaaaaaaaah Phase 39 >>
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Another great chapter. Always worth the wait.

He is a good villain, but I kinda preferred it when he died. It was some minor satisfaction/payback for Athrun and the poor lad gets so little of that.
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That's precisely why he's back. That and he dredges up issues for Athrun that he has to face sooner or later, issues that Viveka can't get him to face because she's coming from it all from outside.
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Another good installment, setting up for yet another big bang to come. At least Phantom Pain has gotten a whole lot better at thinking things through. And I always forget that in the end you didn't kill Kira off, but he is hiding somewhere. He is biding his time to come and steal the show, but evilly so, I bet. ;)
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Phase 40 is up.
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I made the mistake of clicking on one of those links, Shadowcell.

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The answers to all your exam questions are cleverly hidden throughout each chapter.

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ShadowCell wrote:Phase 40 is up.
I'm glad Twilight has some new gimmicks to distinguish it from Destiny more fully.

I can't figure out if Issac is Doomed Love Interest or not quite yet, which is probably a good thing.

But if so, should I be on Team Shinn or Team Issac?

I'm sorry, that was tasteless. :)
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This is an Intriguing series of Fanfiction.
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MURRUE: Infallible accuracy?? I thought you just usually shot all your weapons at random and they just happened to hit stuff.

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Victory Gundam: The Sequel? Wow that's pretty harsh.
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I can kind of see where the reviewer was coming from. I read it a year or so back and while I did like it, some of the deaths just felt random. That said it was awesome what ShadowCell did with the Extended(breaking their conditioning), why Kira wound up brainwashed and crazy in the first place, and some of the battles (ZAFT invasion of the moon and the introduction of the Windam was pretty win) Also how the Astray bunch were worked into the story too >.>
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Yeah, looking back there's a bunch of stuff about that story that I would change, like some of the character focus and definitely Kira's part of the story. Looking back, I'm not even all that convinced by his figurative fall to the dark side, and I wrote the thing. I think it's definitely the work of a younger writer, and I'd like to think I've gotten better since then--and, if I were writing it now, I think it would turn out better.

Although I still think I told a better story than did DESTINY, and if setting the bar that low means you need an "ego check," I can't imagine what they think modesty looks like. =P

(also the next chapter of "TWILIGHT" is in the works, but real life has given me two more cats to put down and two new cats to take care of, so, uh, y'know...it will be up when it's up, and hopefully when it's up is soon)
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Phase 41 is up. Delays are due to aforementioned reasons. My oh-so-checkable ego and I profusely apologize.
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What, a Jona that isn't lobotmized? Argh! Does...not...compute! I bet he doesn't even have a purple mullet anymore! :mrgreen:

I have to say you made him into a right a-hole quite effortlessly by having him disparage Cagalli, resurrect the Akatsuki for his own devices, and then say "go rough up Athrun a little". While it's not your style, I am still hoping that Athrun will deliver a bit of righteous fury (see, Gundam Seed Destiny: dispatching Shinn/Luna) on such a blatant slap on the face against everything he and people close to him deeply cared about. :twisted:

Otherwise, solid work as always, ShadowCell. Seeing you manage to keep on pushing the story onwards makes me pressure myself to push my own story to its eventual finish. One of these days I will. :D
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Yeah, I'm really anxious to see Athrun nail him to the wall again.

Good chapter, as always.
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