Since I'm planning to start the serise and the Episode of Gundam Seed Decade including in RPG maker 2003 i feel like starting to make one. alright let's get started
Cosmic Era 84 a new war on two nations had been reached out by the "Sagittarius Faction" after the third,second and the first bloody valentine warfare had ended and the world was more at the state of Peace but not long until the two evil PLANT and NATURAL Factions joined forces as the "Blackus Empire" handle by the state of Lloyd Tarius declares war on two nations and the world is once again in the state of war
Episode 1: Friendship,School and Gundam Club
Years when war started, Lowe had visited the PLANTS to visit the new chairman under the named of the famous "Kira Yamato" as the two began their discussion to what the future holds them, Lowe Guele has been informed about the Second bloody valentine as well as Kira told him the same thing now at the Orb Inazuma high school, Shinn Asuka now age of 24 begins teaching class about flowers and other things in the meantime Laharren Stonecolf age of 14 picks a fight with bullies taunting them as Daichi Narukami and Keiichi Rokunamura also picks a fight with them, the bullies ran so easily but Keiichi begins to blame Laharren for his carelessness as they are late for school as Laharren saw a nightmare the death of his parents, but he now transfers to inazuma high school, the chairwoman Lacus Cylne summons Shinn asuka back to the plants by tomorrow, Laharren,Keiichi and Daichi wanted to come with him but Shinn dosen't allow them due to their young age and wanted them to learn more, at the next day the kids meets Lirou Satonaka a Glasses girl and tomboyish with her friends Meguru Hanamura and Mizue Kadoya as they watch a news of the attack at the PLANTS but they saw the fixed Impulse and Destiny, the Destiny wipe out the Swordish Gundams in a flash with Freedom's help and Justice, as in the Inazuma High school the 6 meets Zaraki Atta and Nanako Raika witch remarkly as lovers, now the kids saw a Space shuttle heading straight towards the PLANTs at their school, the kids entered it without notice and permissions as Laharren saw a gundam back at the PLANTs a Mysterous enemy Black ship of the Blackus is called the Balzorgius witch confirmed to attack the PLANTs now Shinn Asuka pilots the Destiny again to fight the enemy at the Mysterous White ship known as the Gundaneer, Captain Maiko Kururugi orders the Zaku Teams to engage the Balzorgius Zero, the shuttle enters the PLANTs as Cagali Yula Athta visits Chairman Yamato for what is their condition, as the 10 kids saw 11 and they are joined by Takeru Yotumaru and Kyoshi Tanashi also saw 11 Gundams they are known as (ZGMF-FIRE Flame Gundam),(ZGMF-SEAS Water),(ZGMF-Ground Groundon),(ZGMF-GRAV Gravity),(ZGMF-Wind Aerial),(ZGMF-ICES Frost),(ZGMF-Leaf Leaves),(ZGMF-THUN Lightning),(ZGMF-LITE Light),(ZGMF-DARK Darkness) and Finally ZGMF-ORB0 Destroyer as soon as they saw Shiki Atta and Kyoshi Tanashi rushing through the gundams the kids catch up to them as they saw the manuals or letters, the operator as they saw is non then other then Shinn Asuka now a creator of the 11 most powerful gundams and they pilot it and fight the Balzorgius Zero. Laharren who is a natural and said: Well... Well... Well... The F*****s who love to start wars and bloodsheds are the Evil Coordinators and evil Naturals! They love fighting aren't they?, finally the kids takes out as the alarm sound as Laharren yells at the enemy: YOU WANNA START A WAR?!! THEN GET THROUGH US FIRST! IS A FIGHT YA WANT! IS A FIGHT YA GONNA GET! C'MON YOU F******s!!! Let's Dance! as the Episode ends here
Main Characters seen in this Episode
Laharren Stonecolf
Lowe Guele
Kira Yamato
Shinn Asuka
Other Characters
Cagali Yula Athta
Gundam Pilot Characters:
1. Laharren Stonecolf - Pilot of the Destroyer
2. Daichi Narukami - Pilot of Flames
3. Keiichi Rokunamura - Pilot of Lightning
4. Lirou Satonaka - Pilot of Groundon
5. Meguru Hanamura - Pilot of Light
6. Zaraki Atta - Pilot of Aerial
7. Nanako Raika - Pilot of Gravity
8. Mizue Kadoya - Pilot of Leaf
9. Takeru Yotumaru - Pilot of Frost
10. Kyoshi Tanashi - Pilot of Water
11. Shiki Atta - Pilot of Darkness
sorry about my grammar or something i'm just started making this story hope you can forgive me
Friendship is power and having friends is strength - Gentaro Kisaragi the friendship maker
GET READY TO BE BLOWN AWAY BY THE WIND! LET'S GET THIS OVER WITH!
it's hard to tell you anything about your story if there isn't a story here
and it's hard to tell you about anything about your summary of the first chapter or so of it because it is formatted so terribly it is incomprehensible. punctuation and paragraphs would help. i literally can't tell what's happening in it.
Episode 1: Friendship,Schoo,Spacel and Gundam Club
Episode 2: His name is Light
Episode 3: Fallen Colony to earth
Episode 4: Colony's Fallen down to the blue world
Episode 5: Stopping the Colony for fallen
Episode 6: The World's Ultimate Game Over
Episode 7: Burning Eyes
Episode 8: Shinn Asuka Returns to the Battlefield
Episode 9: Destiny Launching
Episode 10: The Battle of the United Nations
Episode 11: Blackus Empire Top number 1
Episode 12: Demons Everywhere
Episode 13: Never Give up
Episode 14: Sounds like Team Gundaneers
Episode 15: Towards United states of Orb
Episode 16: The Battle Heeds
Episode 17: A Mysterous Island
Episode 18: Desert Island Battle
Episode 19: PAST - Recaps the future of Gundam Seed Destiny
Episode 20: Memories for the future
Episode 21: A Stardy Gundam
Episode 22: A Friend's Death
Episode 23: Meet Starlet Housier
Episode 24: Encounter with Strike Freedom
Episode 25: Destiny Vs Strike Freedom
Episode 26: A Teacher and a Student
Episode 27: The Betrayal and a bad movement
Episode 28: Receiving Heaven's Base
Episode 29: Random Power and Random Movement
Episode 30: A Massival Warfare helds
Episode 31: ZAFT and the Earth Alliance and the Orb Unions
Episode 32: Awakening ZGMF-ORBZ Decade
Episode 33: Now! Defeat Destiny!
Episode 34: The Destiny Gundam's Defeat
Episode 35: Lowe Running Away
Episode 36: The Ultimate Game Over
Episode 37: Attacking on Hellish Island of London
Episode 38: Fear the Power of the Eight Legendary Gundams
Episode 39: Shinn Asuka of the Dark Skies
Episode 40: Ultimate Strike Freedom and Aegis Infinite Justice Assemble
Episode 41: The Kid's Final Battles
Episode 42: Gundam Club Go
Episode 43: The Mission from Space
Episode 44: One more Last Stand
Episode 45: The Last Stand Begins
Episode 46: Power of the Endless
Episode 47: Core Impulse Destiny,Providince Legend,Ultimate Strike Freedom and Aegis Infinite Justice
Episode 48: The Ultimate Pierce Battle
Episode 49: Near Death Awaits
Episode 50 or Final Phase: Gundam Club begin final assault
Final Boss: Friendship,Graduate,Galaxy and Gundam of Tomorrow
Friendship is power and having friends is strength - Gentaro Kisaragi the friendship maker
GET READY TO BE BLOWN AWAY BY THE WIND! LET'S GET THIS OVER WITH!
Laharren StoneColf - Main Protagonist of Gundam Seed Decade and Shinn's Most favorite student, though shinn is a little bit jealous of him and Laharren has a bad boy image and a bad boy goal but decides to befriend with Everyone even every last of the Mobile suit Pilot, he is the Clyne Faction's Trump card later on the story, he defeats the Destiny Gundam with the "Magnificent Sword" and he once again defeat the Impulse Destiny with Decade Gundam's "Friendship Sycthe" he is the pilot of ZGMF-DEST Destroyer and he is the Destroyer of Evil, later on most of the stories he is the Pilot of ZGMF-ORBZ Decade and finally the Ultimate Weapon that can destroy all the fighting is the ZGMF-FRED(Friendship) Destroyer Decade with DRAGOON System and the Magnificent Launcher,Spear and Sword on it witch he can be Undefeatable in battle, witch is create by Shinn Asuka in Return to destroy the fighting.
Daichi Narukami - He is part of Lahar's trio and the Brain of the group, he studies and also sides with the enemy to gain more information, he is one of Laharren's closes friends along with Kyoshi,Keiichi and Zaraki, the five of them makes them like a Dangerous team in comes of a mobile suit combat range and he is also one of the trump cards that the new Clyne faction had. he is the pilot of ZGMF-FIRE Doominish Gundam as he name it and later on the ZGMF-ORRS RisingSun and Lastly the Clyne Faction's Trump Gundam the ZGMF-ZERO BlazeFire with DRAGOON system on it
Keiichi Rokunamura - Keiichi is one of the Toughest boys in Laharren's trio, though he dosen't study Lahar's moves and easily getting beat up by him, and he swores loyality to his superiors like Laharren, Keiichi is rude to evil who dosen't know how to follow rules and orders and respect other just because he is only 16 but they are really mistaking him making him the trump card of the Clyne Faction, he has four closes friends Laharren,Daichi,Kyoshi and Zaraki, tough the five of them make the Ultimate Fighting Machine, he also loves to end the fight so fast when there are many Gundams on the good side ending it as he calls them "boring" he is the pilot of ZGMF-SKUJ Judgement Gundam and also he is the Pilot of ZGMF-ORBA Apocalypse and Finally his favorite gundam that can bring the useless bloodshed of fighting the ZGMF-ERAD Armageddon Gundam with DRAGOON system.
Lirou Satonaka - One of Meguru's Trio of Girls and Kyoshi's crush, she is good in martial arts even means comes in Mobile suit combat, she is very friendly towards to her superiors even when they are down, she is still confronting them to keep trying until the end, she is also the very close friend of Meguru due to her calmness and cool actions, when comes in mobile suit combat, she is calm and only attacks the enemy without shouting at them and using the butterfly technique. she is the pilot of ZGMF-LAND Quake Gundam and later on ZGMF-ORBE EarthBreaker Gundam and Finally her favorite gundam the ZGMF-PUSH Punisher with DRAGOON system on it. witch this allows her to punish everyone who tries to start another pathetic useless war
Meguru Hanamura - Laharren's Childhood friend and also soon to be Girlfriend after Scarlet and the destruction of the Destiny gundam, she has many friends also a bad girl image but she decides to make one as well, both of hers and Lahar's parents are Orb communicaters, she is vowed to defend Orb along with Laharren in order for their parents to see them grown someday, she attends Inazuma High school with Laharren and as well she has a crush on Laharren due to his Gundam skills and capable of destroying all enemies. and after Shinn Asuka's Nearby death when the Destiny Gundam is Eradicated and the Impulse Destiny's Destruction, she cries with Laharren, as Laharren couldn't control his feelings and avenge scarlet after being confronted by Sven Cal Bayang, she is soon determined to Defend orb and everyone else from the war by ending the conflict with Blackus Empire when Lahar defeats their leader. she is the pilot of ZGMF-PACE Light Gundam and later on the ZGMF-ORBL Peacemaker and Finally the ZGMF-LOVE Gungnir Gundam with DRAGOON system on it.
Zaraki Atta - One of the Five Trios and Laharren's close friends, also along with Laharren,Daichi,Keiichi and Kyoshi the boys can be the Undefeatable Fighting machine Fighters as Zaraki creates the Team Awesome, when Shinn scrolleds him that a friend of his creates the team awesome and later cause of his Idiotness he died in the battlefield making zaraki be more aware in the Combat. Zaraki loves to kill enemies when they are deaf or not listening to a warning this can make him go crazy on them. he has a love interest with Nanako Raika, he swores to protect everyone but decides to take it more seriously in battle as well, he is the Pilot of ZGMF-WIND Aerial Gundam and later on the ZGMF-ORBT Templar and finally the ZGMF-TEMP Artemis with DRAGOON system on it.
Nanako Raika - Zaraki's Love Interest, she loves all kinds of flowers, when Shinn Asuka thought her about the flowers, this can make her defend them even means from battle, when she saw an enemy burnt or fires where the flowers are, this can make her go mad and ended up killing them, but Laharren didn't stop her as far as they have been warned, she is also Meguru's friend and part of her trio as well and Laharren's mobile suit trios, she is capable of fighting and in Air type combat mobile suit, she is the pilot of Gravity and later on Excalipoor and lastly the Ultimate weapon but with flowers design on her mobile suit witch is her favorite the Mjollnir Gundam the Ultimate mobile suit that can protect all kinds of flowers with DRAGOON system on it.
Mizue Kadoya - She is part of Meguru's trio and also fund off of Keiichi, she has a crush of Keiichi due to his muscle and famous fame, when comes in training with Keiichi, she felt like becoming close to him, she made a promise to keiichi that she'll be his when a good behavior in act she had. she is the pilot of the ZGMF-LEAF Leaves Gundam and later on ZGMF-ORBL Antares Gundam and Finally the ZGMF-GLEA Partisan Gundam with DRAGOON system on it.
Takeru Yotumaru - He is the Senior of Inazuma High school though he is stronger then Keiichi and not easily being outmatched by Laharren, but can get beaten by Laharren so many times due to being "High and Mighty" Takeru spents all his time in Video games and others and also being active at the Beach, as he also wanted to get some Ice, though witch is his favorite. he is the Pilot of the ZGMF-ICES Frost and later on ZGMF-ORBI Cypress and Lastly the ZGMF-FREZ Mandibular Gundam with DRAGOON system on it
Kyoshi Tanashi - He is a Disco,Jazz and rock loving kid, though he always using the dance technique making all of his enemies confuse and getting them caught of guard, he is also one of the Lahar Trios and a close friend of Laharren,Daichi,Keiichi and Zaraki, and he dosen't like people or friends to argue even means superior he whispers to himself(Why don't they get along) when comes to Arguement, in comes on battle he is confusing his enemy except commander,leader type units who aren't fail for it as he caught himself off guard like that, he is the pilot of ZGMF-SEAS Flood and later on the ZGMF-ORBS Levaetinn and Lastly his Ultimate weapon of mass confusion and witch he loves to frank it with his enemies called the ZGMF-JAZZ Morgenstern Gundam the Ultimate Gundam of Confusion and getting his enemies caught off guard, also with DRAGOON system on it
Shiki Atta - She is Zaraki's Little Sister and also she is kind and nice as well, her favorite color is black and loves to spent her time at looking at the Dark skies, even means at space, she dosen't like fighting at all though a lot of enemies loves to cause trouble she dosen't give them a chance, she is the Grim Reaper of the Gundam squad, on mobile suit combat she ignores her enemy's words though she think is a waste of time, she is full-welled concentrated on mobile suit combat mode and her gundam is the ZGMF-DARK Blackness and later on the ZGMF-ORBC ChaosBringer and Finally her Ultimate Weapon of Blackness the ZGMF-REAP DeathPenalty Gundams
The Mobile suit team of Set 1 is complete more will be soon here stay tuned. sorry for the wrong grammar i won't make the same grammar mistakes again lol.
Friendship is power and having friends is strength - Gentaro Kisaragi the friendship maker
GET READY TO BE BLOWN AWAY BY THE WIND! LET'S GET THIS OVER WITH!
you need to post an actual story. not summaries, not character bios, not mobile suit specs--besides which, those are all meaningless if there's no story to which they attach. it's as if you want to have a story but you don't want to do the work of actually writing it. well, it doesn't work that way. you need to sit down and write something with substance to it. so far all you've got is fluff.
Reading your summary tells me that even if this were fleshed out into a story, it will be a very boring one. I'm sorry but none of this feels like a Gundam story, it sounds like a generic high school drama that just happens to have Gundams in it. The characters are like the kind that people churn out to clog up the Gundam Fanon Wiki, an endless parade of collected character traits with names but no personalities that their creators all think are unique, interesting, and special but very few of them are.
I also noticed that nearly every character is a Gundam pilot but they all eventually upgrade to suits that have DRAGOON systems. Does that mean that every one of your characters has the enhanced spacial awareness ability in order to use them? It is a trait so rare only a handful of people had it so I find it hard to believe that all of these people just happen to have it and they all happen to attend the same school, that is a lot of coincidences. I suspect that this is just a really poor attempt to make your characters seem "special" by giving them special abilities but if you give everyone the same special ability, then it is no longer special.
Finally, if your grammar skills in English are this poor, then seriously consider getting a proof reader to check everything before you post it, or actually make the effort to do it yourself. Just saying you know your grammar is bad and you will do better next time, but fail to do so is simply lazy.
