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Inferno
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 Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 12:16 am |
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ALL CHAPTERS FOR YOUR CONVENIENCE Chapter 1Chapter 2Chapter 3Chapter 4With all my painstaking research done, I present Gundam 0080: Long Journey Home! It's about a group of ex-Zeons deciding to throw in the towel and just head back to Side 3, where they can be done with war once and for all. Of course, they're in for one heck of a trip...
Last edited by Inferno on Sat Jan 22, 2011 4:57 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2011 4:09 pm |
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Bump for Chapter 2. Expect to see our protagonists in action in part 3!
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 1:07 am |
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PART 3! WITH MY FIRST NON-RP FIGHT SCENE EVER.
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Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2011 4:55 pm |
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Part 4: The Federation Strikes Back!
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 10:39 pm |
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OK, temporary hiatus, since I now have something occupying most of my saturdays. But I will try to get something in over the next 4 weeks.
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 7:16 pm |
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I read Chapter one, and while you did a really good job with the setting and explaining what characters/mobile suits we will see. I think it could of been done better if you explained these things through a plot rather than just a narrative, and maybe leave some of the back stories to be explained as the story progresses, allot of good potential though. will continue on in a bit.
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