My MS designs (update 21/10/07)

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My MS designs (update 21/10/07)

Im updating the first post so its easier to add content at later dates.

(10/9/07) Just added a recolour of the rms-141e-01 Xeku. will be moding it at some point. ive got a few ideas but have to wait and see.

(21/10/07) I just came up with the idea of putting more arms on a Raysta. i may recolour it later.

Frame

Frame

Weapons
Beam Handgun
Balistic Handgun


RGM-80R GM Raziel

Raziel


RMS-141e-01 Xeku

Xeku
Xeku mod 1


MWF-JG71w Raysta Worker

Raysta Worker
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Kewl, pretty nifty franken design ya got there. And aside from the legs it doesent even seem to need recoloring. Well done :D
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The upper torso, head and arms look pretty good. That part could use a little work, but other wise, it's fine. The lower part, however, doesn't really match well. The black and white legs look really out of place with the rest of it and the waist looks pretty rough. If you corrected that and perhaps colored it, I think it would look pretty good.
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Looks good, but in my personal opinion I don't think the Strike Gundam's shoulders match the rest of the body too well. Can't wait to see it colored.
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I finished the line art a few day ago, but I just got round to posting it.

The colour version is about 40% done as well.
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Nice designs there! I like the style.
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He looks beyond tank-like, even with no weapons on the lineart :shock:
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Damn. That thing is AWESOME. I agree, the parts do flow a lot better than the ones in the first one did. Excellent work.
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Not bad. The lineart one looks pretty good and flows well. All it needs is the color now.
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Here is a coloured version. (Bottom of first post)

I will end up doing one with shading and maybe some different colour variations.
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You might want to tackle the problem with the left leg first; the area between where the leg and crotch should meet on the left side shouldn't be so open like that. Once you fix that it'd look much better.
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Right, unless you've designed it so that there's no rear skirt armor, the area behind the legs should be colored. Other than that, good job!
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Besides the problem already noted, I see no issues with it. Good job on that design.
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Strike Zero wrote:Right, unless you've designed it so that there's no rear skirt armor, the area behind the legs should be colored. Other than that, good job!
Nah.. it's more like, if he doesn't fill in that area the entire left leg would remain unconnected with the rest of the design. It doesn't matter if it has rear skirt armor or not, the particular area left blank is where the leg joint would connect with the rest of the lower waist.
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Whoops! That was me in a hurry to post it before I went to work.

As for the rear skirt I have plans.

If you have ever seen Bakuretsu Tenshi aka Burst Angel. You know that Jango has its guns mounted in holsters that aren't fixed to the body.

Well the plan is to have Frames handguns mounted a similar way, but have them retract to become the rear skirt when not in use. I may also have thrusters on them to aid manoeuvring.

PS. I hope to have some detail pics up soonish i.e. weapons, packs, etc
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Here are the two handguns Frame carries.

The first is a ballistic handgun, Ka. NEST MSP-7. Its a NEST MSP-7 that was modified to make it fully automatic and so it could use different types of caseless ammunition.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/60572449/

The second is a beam handgun. This one started out as a Meteba Automatic Revolver and was converted to beam pistol.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/60572540/


Forgot to say the beam pistol was inspired by (alright all most copied, but there are differences) a design by biometal79 at devientART. http://biometal79.deviantart.com/
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Is your frame going to be a mass produced type or you are planning on a prototype unit ?

Hmmmm ... somehow it just resembles a little too like the armored WildRaubtier.... well to me thats it. I agree on the unmatching shoulder and leg desing, cause the Ashtray body is sleek and does not seems to go too well. Never the less its still a good design.
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It’s going to be a one off custom built MS.

I’m still not completely happy with the shoulders. I think one that are boxier will be better, but haven’t had time to try any new ones out. If anybody has an idea of what might suit it better then please post your ideas.

Ive also been working on a transformable MA/MS design and I hope to post it sometime soon.
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it looks like a mass production design due the colors. the legs look pretty sturdy, and the head as an interesting design. congratulations
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Although I dont like the orange its a great design. It looks so knightly like a mobile suit belonging to King Arthur himself! I would have a heart attack if you go medieval on it with a cape and a giant sword but it looks awesome the way it is already. You should get going on other designs too!
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