Perspective help

["Kamille! Kamille!]

I drew this to try out some perspective stuff. I really don't care about the details etc at this point. Where and how badly did I screw up, and any suggestions to fix it (right shoulder, I'm looking at you). Thanks.

As it says, the reason there's nothing on the right side is that Char's face will be somewhere around there.

http://img460.imageshack.us/img460/4079 ... tchkn7.jpg

[gihrenzabi]

it looks fine. i guess i dont have eye but to the common man its good.

[Ryujin]

[quote=""Kamille! Kamille!"]I drew this to try out some perspective stuff. I really don't care about the details etc at this point. Where and how badly did I screw up, and any suggestions to fix it (right shoulder, I'm looking at you). Thanks.
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The screw-ups look pretty minor, a little tweaking should fix it.

http://img214.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... corwt3.jpg

["Kamille! Kamille!]

[quote=""Kamille! Kamille!"]I drew this to try out some perspective stuff. I really don't care about the details etc at this point. Where and how badly did I screw up, and any suggestions to fix it (right shoulder, I'm looking at you). Thanks.

The screw-ups look pretty minor, a little tweaking should fix it.

http://img214.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... corwt3.jpg[/quote]

Scratch that, it works. Thanks a lot, that's more or less exactly what I was looking for.