Original Mecha Concept (Need Opinions)

[Oaisis]

Hi guys!! I'm trying to make some custom art for my fightstick and was wanting to do something new. So I made my first "magnified" (dont know the real term) image and also one of my first action posed mecha. Once i get it fixed after this I'll start the actual process of putting on the fightstick and will be sure to show you all the end result. So please be sure to take a few seconds and tell me what you think. Critiques are also welcome. From proportions to pretty much anything!
Work in progress:
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/ ... 395k30.jpg

[Hyakushiki]

Not bad, I can see some of the various mecha influences in the design, a little Gundam, some super robot, and a bit of Tekkaman Blade there too. Give it some color and I think it'll look great, it just needs a background to accent it.

[Thermolysis]

Fun stuff. Great foreshortening, slick design. I'm glad you put subtle cylinders at the joints.

The real challenge will be shading/coloring this beast.

Fightstick? What is that?

I hope you plan on finishing this in software or transposing the lines onto unlined paper.