You never did the Dead Haro sketch you talked about on page one.... PLEASE do the Dead Haro Sketch!

Only that one part, really, and there's quite a bit more to even that part.

Meh... the chain of MS power makes things easier to manage for me, though. If there's a concrete, definite leader, it's easier to figure out where your character stands. At least that's my opinion. Yours can differ if you feel like it. And telling you what, that he saves Mu? I haven't really reveale...

This is about how the chain of MS power goes in the fic: In SEED: 1.) Kira in the Freedom 2.) Athrun in the Justice 3.) Probably Le Cruset in the Providence, but I'm actually not sure at this point how big a role he'll be playing. 4.) Nick in the Blitz Wave 4.5.) Dearka, Yzak, and Mu in their units ...

Thank you for your tips. I greatly appreciate them. However, I have a couple of responses: 1.) I started writing this at least five months before I saw destiny, so I had no idea of Shinn's character at the time. As Nick develops, I'm hoping he leans away from shinn. IDK, I kind of let my characters ...

((This is just the first part. I'll add more parts as I write them.)) Nicholas sighed contentedly as the sun beat down on his face and the wind blew through his sandy-blonde hair. He had left on a cruise to the Bahamas from his home country of Orb just yesterday, along with his parents and younger b...