... Now I have to face the consequences. There’s not enough time to do anything else... I shivering hard and almost scream when I saw a burst of machine gun hitting the back of the Zaku. It’s on short burst and it was controlled with precise aim. The Zaku try to assail this new threat but failin...

...I saw orange colored flash in my left screen and then suddenly a wild vibration took me by complete surprise. I remembered being thrown away up and down before the lights got out, leaving me in complete darkness. Loud explosions nearby and I can hear horrifying sounds from my left. I can’t thin...

I edited most of the first part, adding here and there. I want to edit all, but first I want to know your opinion about my writing capability. It's English and I suffer from my bad grammar. So, I'll post the first page of the edited story. Hopefully it's better than the last one. I'll appreciate any...

The grammer isn't the only problem. Aside from the fact that your character telling the story is with the Federation fighting the Zeon, it is easy to miss the fact that this is takeing place at about the same time as episode 2-3 of Gundam 0083. The fact the the many posts it is in thus breaking up ...

Kay, what exactly are you trying to do here? This seems to be a mish mash of a summary and the story itself. Its hard to read, so please use better grammar and spelling in the story. If you'll make it a bit clearer and easier to read, then we won't bother you again. Sorry bout the grammar. It's my ...

I hear Lt. Larry again on the communication channel, “Receive the data? Follow me then. We’re heading toward Alpha.” We started the conversation with usual name trades and background history. We don’t tell much of ourselves, just some basic information to know each other. He’s Lt. Larry Wa...

It was dreamless. The heat and the humid awaken me. I was sweating in my bed, the air conditioner broke again. I was alone although I share quarter with Irvin. I wake up and notice it’s already 1 PM. I took a shower and found Jasper in the main room. “Jasper do you see Irvin?” He replies, “N...

This particular area known as Oceanic Region consisted of several major islands and many smaller island formations. It was located far north-east from the Australia continent or far south-west from Hawaii. The region was surrounded by the Pacific Ocean. It’s halfway from America to Australia, lite...

UC Gundam: Another Chapter. The night sky looks beautiful; it’s full of celestial objects that make me wonder about the space and beyond. I myself am not so fond of such objects but it’s hard to resist. At least I feel it that way, especially to the stars that glow bright in the darkness of the ...

EDIT: Read bellow. I summarized the whole start. Thank you.

UC Gundam: Another Chapter. I'm starting this out several weeks ago in another forum. I'm thinking to put it also in here to attract more people to read my story. This is my story using the respective UC timeline similar used in the Gundam Series. It's basically another side story and I hoped you'l...